Now I really don't like taking photos every day. Some years ago I enjoyed taking photos of all the things that I was looking but I lost my camera 3 years ago and now I don't have a camera although I like to collect photos.
This photo was taken by my boyfriend during our holidays in the south of Chile.
I love this photo because of two reasons; I like the flowers and I like this photo especially because of remember me, an amazing landscape and a very special holidays with my boyfriend
I remember that this day we was in Osorno and it was raining very hard, but suddenly the rain stopped and the sun and a rainbow appeared.
My boyfriend, who likes to take photographs in general, but especially about natural landscapes take this photograph and tried to inmoratalize this special moment.
Catalina,
ReplyDeleteI don’t mean to be unpleasant or ironic, but you talked a lot in the lab and wrote less words than you were asked to.
Please have a look at these comments:
(that I was looking [...]) Can you provide a preposition? (on, into, at, for,etc)
( I like the flowers): Is ‘the’ necessary here?
(because of remember me): -Use ‘because’+ sentence. Ex, Because I remember... , Because it reminds me of... / -Use ‘because of’+ noun (sustantivo). Ex. Because of the rain, because of you, because of that, etc.
(I remember that this day) :To talk about the past use ‘that day’
(we was): Complete the following: I was, you were, he ..., she ..., we ..., they ...., it ....
(it was raining very hard, but suddenly the rain stopped and the sun and a rainbow appeared.): This is a very good sentence!
(My boyfriend, who likes to take photographs in general, but especially about natural landscapes take):My boyfriend ... took